Peer+editing

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**Directions:** Use the following prompts for specific peer editing ideas. **General Feedback**
It makes me want to keep reading.

The characters seem real.

The writer has taken some time to establish setting, character, and/or plot.

**Voice**
The tone is expressive.

Reader is engaged.

The writer takes a risk.

It is a unique style.

**Word Choice**
The words paint a picture in my mind

The words and phrases are natural

The words and phrases are effective in conveying your meaning.

You use lively verbs and/or adjectives and specific nouns to add depth

You have taken care to choose the right words.

**Sentence Fluency**
Sentences vary in length as well as structure.

Fragments, or other convention "breaks" add style.

Dialogue sounds natural.

Sentence beginnings add originality and energy.

When reading this aloud, it was easy to follow, with no "stumbling" points.

The sentences hang together well.

You have thought about how the words sound when read aloud.